Lear/Rivals

so here i am, trying to fix my paper. apparently, it had too much summary and not enough analysis the first time around. but every time i go to change the summary stuff, i end up putting it back in, in a different way with different wording. 

to me it sounds analytical. but obviously it's not. and i don't know how to fix it. i don't understand how you're supposed to analyze something without stating what it is you're analyzing. 

according to the critique from class the other day, my first three body paragraphs are all summary. but i'm not seeing the summary. so i don't understand what i'm trying to fix right now. 

this is so frustrating!

~kd